Arlette Juarez Ms. Lehmann English 1-1A 6 December 2018 Fairy Tale Once Upon a time... in a somewhat large kingdom there was this prince born. His parents King Jack and his mom Queen Mary didn’t want this popularity life for him, so they kept him a secret for years and years. The princes name is Ace. Ace never really cared about going out and seeing the world up until he turned 13. He was home schooled his whole life. When he tried telling his parents about how he wanted to go out and explore the world. His parents told him no many times till one day... Ace was surprised about them saying yes. They told him that he was old enough to go. He just can’t tell people who he is or where he lived. Ace agreed and left to explore. He was exploring the forest behind the kingdom when he got lost and didn’t know his way back home. He tried looking around for people or other houses or villages, but he couldn’t find any. He went deeper and deeper into the forest when he bumped into a girl. The girl was frightened and ran off before Ace got to ask for her name, Ace began to run in the direction the girl was running hoping that he would bump into her again. Ace ran and he ran but he didn’t find her, instead he found a little house. He thought to himself maybe this is where the girl went. When Ace knocked a lady with long dark brown hair answered the door. He asked for the girl. The lady called out for her daughter Olivia. Ace was surprised that he had found the girl. Olivia steeped towards the door. Her mother grabbed her and pushed her outside. Ace asked Olivia if she liked her mother. Olivia said. “No, that woman is not my mother. She is evil and she killed my father.” Olivia began to cry. Ace was upset about what happened and invited Olivia to his house. Olivia didn’t respond she just stood there not knowing what to say to him. After a whileOlivia’s mother came out telling her to come inside. Olivia looked at Ace and began to run into the forest. Olivia kept running and running she looked behind her and saw that Ace was following her. She asked Ace if she could stay with him for a bit. Ace felt bad and he was starting to like the girl. Olivia and Acewalked back to the kingdom. They walked to the castle. When they walked in, the king and queen looked and the girl and took Ace to talk to him. Ace told them what happenedand they allowed the girl to stay in the guest room. They told Ace they wanted her gone in a few weeks. Olivia stayed for 3 weeks when Aces parents told her it was time for her to go back home. Olivia didn’tgo, She begged them and she begged. Aces parents allowed her to stay longer than planned. Years went by Ace and Olivia are now 27 and they are getting married. They were so excited for this day to come until it was all ruined by Olivia’s mother.
Students Choice Reflection 1) List one thing you’ve learned from writing this paper that you can apply to other writing assignments. What will that look like? Answer ~ One thing that I learned while writing this story is how to explain the things that were going on in the story. I will come upon this in many other stories. 2) Identify a specific revision you were asked to make explain why (this can be at any stage of the writing process). How did you revise? What did you learn? Answer~ I fixed how long my story was and some words that I missed spelled. I learned how to take my time and I learned how to fix my story were everything in it makes sense. 3) What are the conventions of a story and how did you meet those in this assignment? Answer~ Some of the conventions that I came across while making this story were that I had to make everything in the story make sense. Imet those when I was trying to explain what happened in the story. 4) Given more time to work on this assignment, how would you improve it? Answer~ I would have made my paper longer and I would have tried to explain more things in my story. 5) What is one thing you’re proud of in this paper? Answer~ I finished on time and I actually tookthe time to finish it and read over it.